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Editor's Comments: As you will see from the comments of the referee, this manuscript is not deemed appropriate as Little Gems column article. The referee does indicate that it has promise as a regular article, but only after improvements have been made with regard to the grammar and language; my own thoughts are in line with this assessment, but I am not comfortable sending this version out for further expert external review as a regular article until it has been completely revised and improvements in the language have been made. (As an example of where improvements are necessary, the first two sentences suffer from grammar problems, so much so that they are difficult to interpret.) Furthermore, the most recent citation in your manuscript is from 2002; several Arduino based papers have appeared in the literature since then, at least one of which is likely to be relevant, so your manuscript should be rewritten after studying that literature. Finally, it would be useful to see more detail about how you use this in your own class or lab setting, and to see a sample of the data over a range of depths of water (or perhaps other fluids) so that others can assess whether they want to invest energy in mimicking your setup, so please consider how you might include those ideas in your revised manuscript also. Should you wish to pursue publication of this work in TPT further, then it will be important to revise your manuscript along the lines suggested above; I will then strive to find suitable expert reviewers to further assess your submission. Thank you for your consideration. **************** Reviewer Comments: Reviewer #1 Evaluations: The paper contributes to the teaching of introductory physics.: Yes The material is correct as written.: Yes The material is novel (not common knowledge or readily available).: Yes The level of presentation is appropriate for readers of TPT.: Yes The quality of the writing (clarity of presentation) is acceptable.: Doubtful A thorough literature search has been done as eviden 這個(gè)是要改稿件格式適應(yīng)欄目，還是改欄目。 發(fā)自小木蟲Android客戶端 |
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Q: 是要改稿件格式適應(yīng)欄目，還是改欄目 (?) A: 文章范圍很大, 不適合在 TPT (The Physics Teacher) 雜志的 "Little Gems" 小課題專欄登; 高中老師大多不熟 Arduino, 但很適合大專教學(xué) ---------- 大問(wèn)題很多, 英文爛相對(duì)事小 (不修不行, 編輯連文章開頭兩句都看不懂) - 參考書目中的最新文章2002見(jiàn)刊, 之后發(fā)表的相關(guān)文章很多, 建議細(xì)讀若干("至少其中某一"  新文章后重寫- 編輯: "盡力詳述如何在不同水位或不同流體環(huán)境用此教具" - 內(nèi)審: "實(shí)驗(yàn)步驟描述不清, 沒(méi)提怎么上傳代碼 |
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